Red light dreaming

Dear English-speaking friends, I asked Chat GPT- to help me to edit my poem.

My version is :

Why did you run away, darling?

I ran a red light dreaming of you

An officer and a ticket, I have to pay.

Why didn’t you stay

Why

Don’t you know

That all around the world

Officers

Don’t understand the meaning of dreaming?

(he or she edited my pom and sent me this:

( I want to know which one is better.)

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"Why Did You Run Away, Darling?"

I ran a red light, lost in thoughts of you,

And soon enough, an officer and a ticket too.

But why did you leave? Why did you go?

Don't you know, my love, how much I miss you so?

Officers and tickets, they don't understand,

The power of dreams and love's sweet demand.

But now I'm left here, feeling all alone,

Wishing you were here, where you belong.